Hello all. As a slight tangent I have edited one of my paragraphs in one of my previous posts, as upon second inspection I found that it did not meet my standards.
The edit may seem minor. My thinking is that tone can go a long way when conveying a particular idea. Thus, tone must be elegantly dealt with. The edited paragraph has been juxtaposed in brackets proceeding the un-edited paragraph so as to preserve the original flow of the conversation as it took place.
I would also like to thank Nicholas and Night Owl for attempting to elaborate upon an idea that I was unable to articulate at the time, and I would also say that my proceeding conversation with Anagogy has been good fun in that it challenged me to consciously articulate otherwise unconscious ideas. :)
The edit may seem minor. My thinking is that tone can go a long way when conveying a particular idea. Thus, tone must be elegantly dealt with. The edited paragraph has been juxtaposed in brackets proceeding the un-edited paragraph so as to preserve the original flow of the conversation as it took place.
I would also like to thank Nicholas and Night Owl for attempting to elaborate upon an idea that I was unable to articulate at the time, and I would also say that my proceeding conversation with Anagogy has been good fun in that it challenged me to consciously articulate otherwise unconscious ideas. :)
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