04-09-2016, 01:40 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-09-2016, 04:42 PM by I am Shayne.)
Wow, seriously good poems here. I just recently started getting into reading poetry online, and here it comes up on bring4th haha.
Here's a poem I wrote senior year of high school. It's meaning is more advanced than my mind was was at the time.
EVERYTHING IS imPOSSIBLE
In reality a child is more powerful than the average man.
his young mind creates iLlusions carrying a boundless span.
man is trapped by his own imagination of self-defeat.
he knows not the concept of thoughts discrete.
if the body is separate from the mind,
impossibiLities will occur.
fact and fiction will be difficUlt to differ.
a fine line lies between the two.
it all dependS on your point of view.
if pessimism Is your way of creed,
congratulations you will never succeed.
positive thought and self-belief,
an open mind and nothing beneath;
bare necessities tO keep life secure.
merge the qualities to fiNd your cure.
the sickness of the individual man
will be healed when the spiritual sun riseS to reveal
the illusionary reality.
Here's a poem I wrote senior year of high school. It's meaning is more advanced than my mind was was at the time.
EVERYTHING IS imPOSSIBLE
In reality a child is more powerful than the average man.
his young mind creates iLlusions carrying a boundless span.
man is trapped by his own imagination of self-defeat.
he knows not the concept of thoughts discrete.
if the body is separate from the mind,
impossibiLities will occur.
fact and fiction will be difficUlt to differ.
a fine line lies between the two.
it all dependS on your point of view.
if pessimism Is your way of creed,
congratulations you will never succeed.
positive thought and self-belief,
an open mind and nothing beneath;
bare necessities tO keep life secure.
merge the qualities to fiNd your cure.
the sickness of the individual man
will be healed when the spiritual sun riseS to reveal
the illusionary reality.