07-31-2012, 08:01 PM
Thanks for the responses guys. It's great to know that it touched some of you, that's one of the reasons I like sharing my "stuff".
Here's a first draft of a song made for a friend which is in a similar vein. I hope you guys like it.
Light
Wake and say my mornings grace
May your image fill this place
Place my face upon her breast
The warmth of her chest puts me to rest
The face of all is what I seek
No limits I see you to your peaks
Searching about day and night
For that thing we call light
[Chorus]
love and light may seem different to he
The lords kingdom may seem far to she
But, if death only comes in threes
Then there may be something coming
For you and me
[Verse 2]
We’re gonna fly away, clear past the everglades
Toll away till we’ve collapsed in the shade
Hold one another till we begin to fade
Till love replace hate, till god retrace fate
I’ll cherish the moment, this day, this second
I reckon, this is what light feels like
The thing which illuminates the heavens at night
The substance which causes life to ignite.
[Chorus]
[Verse 3]
Out with the old, in with the new
Out of the mold, into a new hue
Walking the steps and greeting those I once knew
My being aches and shakes from contact with you
Your essence, your presence, your evanescence, your resurrections
I was seeded into the dark to feel your spark
An arc of sorts around you fills me to new heights
Thank you creator, my maker, for sight
To perceive your manifestations;
of might, of light.
Here's a first draft of a song made for a friend which is in a similar vein. I hope you guys like it.
Light
Wake and say my mornings grace
May your image fill this place
Place my face upon her breast
The warmth of her chest puts me to rest
The face of all is what I seek
No limits I see you to your peaks
Searching about day and night
For that thing we call light
[Chorus]
love and light may seem different to he
The lords kingdom may seem far to she
But, if death only comes in threes
Then there may be something coming
For you and me
[Verse 2]
We’re gonna fly away, clear past the everglades
Toll away till we’ve collapsed in the shade
Hold one another till we begin to fade
Till love replace hate, till god retrace fate
I’ll cherish the moment, this day, this second
I reckon, this is what light feels like
The thing which illuminates the heavens at night
The substance which causes life to ignite.
[Chorus]
[Verse 3]
Out with the old, in with the new
Out of the mold, into a new hue
Walking the steps and greeting those I once knew
My being aches and shakes from contact with you
Your essence, your presence, your evanescence, your resurrections
I was seeded into the dark to feel your spark
An arc of sorts around you fills me to new heights
Thank you creator, my maker, for sight
To perceive your manifestations;
of might, of light.