Poetry

[haqiqu]

this is a nice poem, confused. it echos the pain we can experience when we try to look beyond the veil, so to speak. i learned from my studies in Sufism to let go of expectations and to let go of attachment to results. that was very freeing for me. so now i try not to expect a certain outcome from any situation and try not to be attached to any request or action of my own.

Dear Haqiqu, thank you deeply, my sweet sister.

I just wish to state for the record that I take upon a line of lines from the poem of the previous contributor to just fuel and expand upon a thought. It is not a counterargument, though it may suddenly seem like that at first sight.

Thanks for keeping alive this beautiful thread, haqiqu. This thread speaks the language of the heart. Moreover, I perfectly agree with the lessons you learned from studies in the tradition of Sufism. Thank you for sharing, haqiqu

nice concept for building a poem. keep 'em coming!!

and you're welcome, it's all whispers from Spirit . . .