"Ra Ra Ree ..."

[Kaaron]

Welcome to the forum opale.
I had similar thoughts regarding the technical and sometimes seemingly over complicated phrasing of the Law of One.
I came to be of the opinion that the writing style seems to serve several purposes.
It ensures precision of communication for one. Nothing can be misconstrued.
Secondly, it encourages the reader to take in and understand esoteric concepts in a way that cuts down on direct quotes and plagiarism, when used in the context of a teaching or reference tool. Instead, relaying the information requires translating LOO jargon into layman's terms, requiring a more holistic almost transcendent interpretation that is unique to each person.
Also, it trains me to hold several, parallel trains of thought simultaneously, due to the often long winded sentences.

I think the two different inclinations you're feeling might stem from a natural side effect in which, through seeking pure forms of truth, you're offered the opportunities to accept other trains of thought.
Go with your heart bro...you already know.