only look at if u like rap lyrics(i wrote)

[MDL5]

dont read past this sentence if u do not have respect for rap.(i hav respect for al music)






i never write fake raps. its all real with me and dont hate just bring the hate somewhere else not here but i kinda jus wrote this in the past 10 minutes raps help the stress go away but i really am changed but i used to think differntly thruout different points of my life but those lyrics came from the heart respect to all much love oh and id always dream about making it wit my raps getting money and the first thing id do is help my mom and dad cuz my rich grandparents wont help them, thats all id do with the cash is first off help my familly ill record a rap and show u one day maybe

its not about ur age, or how u hav it made, parents sellin crack out the house to get the rent paid, we stuck in poverty like a cage, we in this poverity n they tell me hav faith, but it gave me rage, grow up young i mean u got do tht s*** today, im still dreamin every day to get away and i pray, that im heard, ja praise much thankjs for the herb, my heart filled wit hate wen me n mom got kicked to the curb, they say im under the curve, land lords got some nerve, now im with my grandma i was whipin her black benz even tho it was hers, blunt smoke til the end driven id swerve, 110 speedin thought of my dad then i felt worse, now that i look bak im blessed im not in a herse, i m gettin my head right im down with the earth that has been tru since birth, but no matter wher i am im thankful and happy i had to learn that first, felt like the concept quinched my thirst, love to all are now my most thought of words.

[Fastidious Emanations]

http://www.bring4th.org/forums/showthrea...#pid142874

[MDL5]

http://www.bring4th.org/forums/showthrea...#pid142874

much love ja praise!! u are really good homie oh my god thats awesome!!!! good job i love it my god father owns a studio we can rap together or somthing! just sharing together is awesome tho i love it i love the support i truly feel ur lyrics!!! i truly do!!!! we shud connect lyrics we can make such good songs and also i believe in ur concepts in the rap above i just wrote real quickj out of emotions that were bubbleing up but i can write some vey very deep stuff with ab ab rhymes much love to u and Ja bless message me any time or email, i can gauruntee no one wud picture who i am in real life based on the things i posted prior to the rap just bcuz not many are spiritually advanced like us u jus made my day homie!

[Fang]

Man are you for real?

[MDL5]

Man are you for real?

everything happens in life and we learn from mistakes those who judge do not know the true story. of course i am real aha just different..ive had my own trials and tribulations to teach me those that who have not gone thru could not understand but to have love and give thanks we can all understand and thanks for the support

[Fang]

Ah yes I'm sure you've had many a trial and tribulation
Oh I'm sure I could not understand what you've been through, no one in the world has problems but you, right?

Lol, here's a hint; at the start of each line, actually put it on a new line it will make what you have to say (rap?) a lot easier to comprehend.

[michael430]

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[Fang]

My guides have informed me that you did not actually laugh out loud, I find this lack of honesty disturbing.

But lol, cool your jets mate, this is a place of love remember?

[MDL5]

we all chill here haha sorry i just make up my own way of reading it like i just put " ," after every time a word rhymed or at least most the time i was jus spur of the moment gettin thoughts in my head out

[Fang]

Eh, I don't mean to discourage from your artform mister MDL5 it's just that this is probably not the best place for it, this forum is a bit mish mash at the moment but it's intended purpose was still spiritually oriented.
The treehouse forum or maybe even the "Life on Planet Earth" though would be a good place for something like this, it's under "bring4th forums two" if you haven't seen it.

[MDL5]

Eh, I don't mean to discourage from your artform mister MDL5 it's just that this is probably not the best place for it, this forum is a bit mish mash at the moment but it's intended purpose was still spiritually oriented.
The treehouse forum or maybe even the "Life on Planet Earth" though would be a good place for something like this, it's under "bring4th forums two" if you haven't seen it.

sorry, but please let me tell you i know and appriciate the fact i am blessed and i know people have much harder times and hav had it worse than me and i pray and thank that i am where i am today i was only stating that few know the story that i went thru so they may be uninformed on who i truly am or what i mean, i will stop posting and just observe the website

[isis]

Eh, I don't mean to discourage from your artform mister MDL5 it's just that this is probably not the best place for it, this forum is a bit mish mash at the moment but it's intended purpose was still spiritually oriented.
The treehouse forum or maybe even the "Life on Planet Earth" though would be a good place for something like this, it's under "bring4th forums two" if you haven't seen it.

sorry, but please let me tell you i know and appriciate the fact i am blessed and i know people have much harder times and hav had it worse than me and i pray and thank that i am where i am today i was only stating that few know the story that i went thru so they may be uninformed on who i truly am or what i mean, i will stop posting and just observe the website

michael, fang bites...

& he just recently posted that he says much of the things he says "in the spirit of sass"...so please don't stop posting.

i think your posts are great (& effortlessly comprehensible -- no matter the format) & i enjoy them & u make me laugh a lot.

the poetry thread that primordial abyss linked to is probably the best place for your lyrics.

i hope to read lots more very soon.

[MDL5]

Eh, I don't mean to discourage from your artform mister MDL5 it's just that this is probably not the best place for it, this forum is a bit mish mash at the moment but it's intended purpose was still spiritually oriented.
The treehouse forum or maybe even the "Life on Planet Earth" though would be a good place for something like this, it's under "bring4th forums two" if you haven't seen it.

sorry, but please let me tell you i know and appriciate the fact i am blessed and i know people have much harder times and hav had it worse than me and i pray and thank that i am where i am today i was only stating that few know the story that i went thru so they may be uninformed on who i truly am or what i mean, i will stop posting and just observe the website

michael, fang bites...

& he just recently posted that he says much of the things he says "in the spirit of sass"...so please don't stop posting.

i think your posts are great (& effortlessly comprehensible -- no matter the format) & i enjoy them & u make me laugh a lot.

the poetry thread that primordial abyss linked to is probably the best place for your lyrics.

i hope to read lots more very soon.

ah thats awesome i love to see people like u i appreciate people like u more than any one wud ever know. thanks friends! i always send u all positive energy!

[Spaced]

I liked it has a good flow, do you have a beat to go with it?

[MDL5]

I liked it has a good flow, do you have a beat to go with it?

not specifically i have other stuff that i actually sat down n wrote n hav beats for and this was jus off the top of the head real quick jus felt like sharing a little bit and thank u so much for the kindness it reasures me chill good people are out there, it means so much to be kind thank u!