01-08-2017, 03:39 PM
I can't help but be reminded of something from Babylon 5. One character writes a book of wisdom that unintentionally becomes a holy book, equivelant to the Bible. The character (G'Kar) is very intelligent, but very practical and down to earth. A bunch of his race start reproducing his book as a holy book. He notices that on one of the pages of the copies made, there is a brown circle across mark. G'kar tries to explain to them in horror that it is just a coffee stain and is completely unimportant (superflous) to the message of the book.
I am suggesting almost all the "shall we says" in the material are the equivelant of the coffee stain in the book. I am not going so far as to say that they should be edited out, but just add a line to cross them out so they don't muddy up difficult to understand concepts. That is the purpose of this project.
I am suggesting almost all the "shall we says" in the material are the equivelant of the coffee stain in the book. I am not going so far as to say that they should be edited out, but just add a line to cross them out so they don't muddy up difficult to understand concepts. That is the purpose of this project.