05-02-2016, 10:43 AM
I like the subjects of your poems and the creative word choice. So cool to have a community of Law of One type thinkers, especially in the poetry category. I just love that we have other selves available to communicate within a similar distortion.
Repost 'my' works as you please. Thank you for wishing to spread the word.
Here's another poem I wrote when I was a senior in high school. It's more 'advanced' than my level of thinking at the time.
EVERYTHING IS imPOSSIBLE
In reality a child is more powerful than the average man.
his young mind creates iLlusions carrying a boundless span.
man is trapped by his own imagination of self-defeat.
he knows not the concept of thoughts discrete.
if the body is separate from the mind,
impossibiLities will occur.
fact and fiction will be difficUlt to differ.
a fine line lies between the two.
it all dependS on your point of view.
if pessimism Is your way of creed,
congratulations you will never succeed.
positive thought and self-belief,
an open mind and nothing beneath;
bare necessities tO keep life secure.
merge the qualities to fiNd your cure.
the sickness of the individual man
will be healed when the spiritual sun riseS to reveal
the illusionary reality.
Repost 'my' works as you please. Thank you for wishing to spread the word.
Here's another poem I wrote when I was a senior in high school. It's more 'advanced' than my level of thinking at the time.
EVERYTHING IS imPOSSIBLE
In reality a child is more powerful than the average man.
his young mind creates iLlusions carrying a boundless span.
man is trapped by his own imagination of self-defeat.
he knows not the concept of thoughts discrete.
if the body is separate from the mind,
impossibiLities will occur.
fact and fiction will be difficUlt to differ.
a fine line lies between the two.
it all dependS on your point of view.
if pessimism Is your way of creed,
congratulations you will never succeed.
positive thought and self-belief,
an open mind and nothing beneath;
bare necessities tO keep life secure.
merge the qualities to fiNd your cure.
the sickness of the individual man
will be healed when the spiritual sun riseS to reveal
the illusionary reality.