The Ra Material minus the elaborate/ superflous language

[Aion]

I think the challenge is that it is likely everyone would strike out different parts. So perhaps it can't quite be framed as a universal improvement as some may consider some things vital and other may not.

I do, however, support the approach of attempting to simplify the language that Ra uses but I do think it is hard to see Ra as a personality without that apparently 'flowery' language as it is part of what makes me feel that Ra is speaking, rather than writing. Remember, the Ra Material is a transcription of a conversation, not a book written.