05-25-2013, 10:12 PM
Rather convoluted. Too much detail can be distracting instead of informing. Most readers can easily create the scenes in their mind with only a skeleton of an environmental description. Just IMO.
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Rate my writing. - by Adonai One - 05-25-2013, 02:52 AM
RE: Rate my writing. - by GentleReckoning - 05-25-2013, 03:39 AM
RE: Rate my writing. - by Adonai One - 05-25-2013, 03:44 AM
RE: Rate my writing. - by ChickenInSpace - 05-25-2013, 06:39 AM
RE: Rate my writing. - by Brittany - 05-25-2013, 10:12 PM
RE: Rate my writing. - by Adonai One - 05-25-2013, 11:13 PM
RE: Rate my writing. - by Monica - 05-25-2013, 11:27 PM
RE: Rate my writing. - by ChickenInSpace - 05-26-2013, 06:49 AM
RE: Rate my writing. - by Monica - 05-26-2013, 11:34 AM
RE: Rate my writing. - by ChickenInSpace - 05-26-2013, 12:22 PM
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