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Law of One Overview Presentation Video - waskosky - 02-27-2016
Hello,
I recently put together a Law of One presentation for my local ET discussion and contact group in Colorado Springs, and recorded it, edited it, and posted it on Youtube. I probably made a lot of mistakes in my wording and wouldn't mind getting feedback on specific details. I can still add annotations on Youtube to help clarify or correct things if you see something that seems to inappropriately misrepresent the material.
I thought this would be good to have on Youtube since I couldn't actually find any other extended video overview presentation like this.
The first 15 minutes or so is a kind of setup to the idea of the material, and then the next 7 minutes after that is an introduction to the production of the material, so it is around minute 22 where the meat of the presentation begins.
Most people who watch this say I went too fast. I agree with them. I had a 2 hour time limit for the library room reservation and wanted to say so much! At least you can pause it if you want to let something sink in or read the full slide. I had to cut out a lot that I may put into a future presentation.
RE: Law of One Overview Presentation Video - Jade - 02-28-2016
(02-27-2016, 09:54 PM)waskosky Wrote: Hello,
I recently put together a Law of One presentation for my local ET discussion and contact group in Colorado Springs, and recorded it, edited it, and posted it on Youtube. I probably made a lot of mistakes in my wording and wouldn't mind getting feedback on specific details. I can still add annotations on Youtube to help clarify or correct things if you see something that seems to inappropriately misrepresent the material.
I thought this would be good to have on Youtube since I couldn't actually find any other extended video overview presentation like this.
The first 15 minutes or so is a kind of setup to the idea of the material, and then the next 7 minutes after that is an introduction to the production of the material, so it is around minute 22 where the meat of the presentation begins.
Most people who watch this say I went too fast. I agree with them. I had a 2 hour time limit for the library room reservation and wanted to say so much! At least you can pause it if you want to let something sink in or read the full slide. I had to cut out a lot that I may put into a future presentation.
Hey there!
This is awesome! I live in Colorado Springs too! What a neat thing!
I watched some of your presentation and thank you for doing what you are doing. If the feedback was that you were going too fast, it might be because you tried to cram SO MUCH into that 1 hour 40 minutes! What a huge lecture! For people who have no idea of the Law of One, that is a lot of information to absorb in one sitting. Sometimes, less is more, though I'm sure you were able to hit notes that resonated with most of the people in the group with you. But if you continue in this style (and you should if you like it! ET Disclosure groups are a perfect target audience for the material) then maybe consider pairing it down a bit, maybe even making a series that progresses upon itself. That's my critical feedback. As far as less critical feedback, you seem very confident speaking in front of people, and have a pleasing presence. You also seem knowledgeable about the material. I don't think it was that your delivery was too fast most of the time, just the amount of material you were trying to squeeze in can probably make it feel overwhelming.
Thanks again for what you're doing!
RE: Law of One Overview Presentation Video - 1109 - 02-28-2016
I too have been tempted to allow my hair to reach those elusive 4.5 inches, we'll see. Great work with the presentation!